Do Questions Make Good Headlines for Brochures, Web Pages, Newsletters, and Direct Mail Fundraising?
Do question headlines work?
If you are reading this article, then the answer is a definite "yes."
I spent several happy years as a copy editor and headline writer at The Journal Gazette. Some people argue vigorously against the use of questions in headlines. But I disagree. I believe that asking a question is one of the most potent attention-getting openers for public relations writers who produce Web sites, fundraising appeals, direct mail, brochures and newsletters. To be effective, the question headline must ask a question that the reader can empathize with or would like to see answered. Some examples:
-- "Do you make these mistakes in English?"
-- "What do Japanese managers know that American managers sometimes lack?"
-- "Is THIS what your teen will be doing tonight?"
-- "Do you have you any of these decorating problems?"
-- "Do you close the bathroom door even when you're the only one home?" (Psychology Today)
Don't let anyone tell you that questions in headlines are a bad idea.
Shifting gears but still speaking of headlines....
Just for fun, here are some real-world headlines that may have missed the mark.
-- Juvenile court to try shooting defendant
-- Plane too close to ground, crash probe told
-- Miners refuse to work after death
-- Stolen painting found by tree
-- If strike isn't settled quickly, it may last a while
-- Cold wave linked to temperatures
-- Red tape holds up new bridge
-- Typhoon rips through cemetery; hundreds dead
-- New study of obesity looks for larger test group
-- Astronaut takes blame for gas in spacecraft
-- Kids make nutritious snacks.
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